Kopywriting Kourse – AppSumo
AppSumo is a web-based company that constantly improves its users lives through strategic discounts on needed products for startups and business users, or this fat-ass Sumo sends you one MASSIVE money-saving deal on tech stuff for startups (like apps and software)… everyday.
Which one was easier to understand (and possibly more offensive)? You’re right, the second one. That’s ’cause it doesn’t contain all the bloated “buzzwords” most businesses use. I mean, WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU WRITE LIKE THAT? Ok ok, the above example was a cheap-shot example. How about some proof that words on the page make MORE MONEY?